Lay next to me temptress
Lay close to me,
Whispering in my ear...
Whisper words that i long to hear

Your eyes mesmerizing, looking into mine
Looking into my feelings and thoughts
That have grown for you over time...

Your beautiful wavy hair drapes over my face
as you lean over me..keeping me still, in place
slowly caressing your smooth skin
tracing your waistline..lowerback, while you move closer in

Your lips like silk, press against mine
My hands that were holding your waist begin to slide
Lower past you hips...
Shaking slightly as i bite my lip...

Slowly sliding off you black silk chemise
My eyes wondering
the parts of you that cant be missed....

Falling into a dizzy state of unconsciousness
as your hands slide over me
touching, stroking, feeling....
tilting back my head so i cannot see....

Is this reality?
Is this a dream?
I dont know...
but for now im just thinking it over and over..
Untill one day this will happen..
Holding someone close...
and forever i hold her...

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Comment by PuddyGirl on February 4, 2016 at 7:49am

Comment by Annabellle on February 24, 2011 at 2:32am
very emotional, I was touched and moved, thank you
Comment by Hank & Liz Henry on July 22, 2010 at 12:53pm
Lovely, beautiful, sensuous, and all the wonderful words in the English language. I do hope for you to find that someone to hold close like that, forever. I'm sure that only women can sense and enjoy the erotica that one woman brings another. I only wish it were me!
Comment by ThiqMina76 on September 18, 2009 at 5:39am
That is a beautiful poem, I enjoyed it.
Comment by Hank & Liz Henry on September 13, 2009 at 9:20am
What needs be said? The poem speaks well for itself . . . better than what I might laud it to be. Lovely, Amanda, . . . lovely & so true to life!
Comment by Karan on September 13, 2009 at 12:47am
That's a really good poem... I like it a lot.
Comment by Amanda Jane on September 10, 2009 at 8:01pm
Took me a little while to write it ^^


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